The chart below shows the resons why people travel to eork by bicyle or by car. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the proportions of
people
travelling by cars and bikes based on five different causes. Overall
, the majority of people
choosing
cars Wrong verb form
choose
due to
it's
comfort, Correct your spelling
their
while
maintaining healthy
lifestyle and reducing pollution is the main focus of cycling.
Add an article
a healthy
To begin
, the figures for workers who prefered
to travel by Correct your spelling
preferred
bikes
in order to boost their physical strength and benefit the environment, Fix the agreement mistake
bike
accounting
for the highest amount 30% each. There Wrong verb form
accounted
is
minor percentages of employees cycling to avoid parking problems and costs, culminating at 15% and 13% respectively. Change the verb form
are
In contrast
, only 12% people
believe that cycling saves more time than using vehicles.
Turning to the causes of driving, Change preposition
of people
with
40% for comfort as their main reason. Followed by, 21% Change preposition
apply
drivers
Change preposition
of drivers
due to
the far distance to their office. The speed and the spacious body of a car were another two reasons for people
using vehicles standing both equaly
14%. The Correct your spelling
equally
last
11% considered cars provide more safety compared to bikes.Submitted by dharyuschen12 on
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