The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line graph gives information about the
number
of enquiries
received by the Tourist Information Office over a period of six months in 2011 in one city.
Overall
, the number
of enquiries
received by telephone and in person has increased significantly. In contrast
, enquiries
by letter/email decreased considerably.
A deep analysis of the line graph provided reveals the amount of enquiries
the Tourist Information Office received in person increased rapidly from about 450 in January and reached a peak at around 1900 in June. On the other hand
, the number
of enquiries
received by letter/email decreased slightly from about 750 in the first month of 2011 to nearly 400 in June.
It is noticeable that the number
of enquiries
by telephone has fluctuated that it is reduced minimally from about 900 to 800 between January and February. However
, after that, the number
of enquiries
by telephone rose significantly from 800 to double at 1600 between February and June.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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