The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows data about the proportion of global
population
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and wealth by region. It is noticeable that global wealth is distributed mainly in 3
regions
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___ North America, Europe and Rich Asia-Pacefic where the
population
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percentages in these areas are very low compared with the rest of the
world
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. A deep analysis of the bar chart provided reveals the top 3 richest
regions
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in the
world
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mentioned above take almost 90%,
while
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the rest of the
world
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takes only about 10%. The most poor
regions
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are India and Africa which are only distributed proportion as smallest as about 1%. It can be seen from the chart that many people live in China which makes the country have the highest
population
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in the
world
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which is about 24%. Next destinations take the top 2
regions
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and have the largest distribution are India, Europe and other Asia Pacefic which is above 45%
population
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in the
world
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. There are not many people living in Rich Asia-Pacefic which takes only 5% which shows the lowest proportion.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, regions, world with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • global population
  • distribution of wealth
  • percentages
  • region
  • Asia
  • Africa
  • Europe
  • North America
  • South America
  • Oceania
  • disparity
  • account for
  • follow
  • despite
  • vary
  • demonstrate
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