The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart shows data about the proportion of global
population
and wealth by region. It is noticeable that global wealth is distributed mainly in 3
regions
___ North America, Europe and Rich Asia-Pacefic where the
population
percentages in these areas are very low compared with the rest of the
world
. A deep analysis of the bar chart provided reveals the top 3 richest
regions
in the
world
mentioned above take almost 90%,
while
the rest of the
world
takes only about 10%. The most poor
regions
are India and Africa which are only distributed proportion as smallest as about 1%. It can be seen from the chart that many people live in China which makes the country have the highest
population
in the
world
which is about 24%. Next destinations take the top 2
regions
and have the largest distribution are India, Europe and other Asia Pacefic which is above 45%
population
in the
world
. There are not many people living in Rich Asia-Pacefic which takes only 5% which shows the lowest proportion.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, regions, world with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • global population
  • distribution of wealth
  • percentages
  • region
  • Asia
  • Africa
  • Europe
  • North America
  • South America
  • Oceania
  • disparity
  • account for
  • follow
  • despite
  • vary
  • demonstrate
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