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The pie charts show the result of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services

The pie charts show the result of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services
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The given pie charts illustrate the results of research performed by a university about IT support offered and current opening
hours
 with the respondents from full-time and part-time
students
 in terms of giving opinions about its
services
.
Overall
, it can be seen that in terms of giving opinion to IT support offered, most of the full-time
students
 said they are very happy with the
services
 offered and it is
also
 obvious on their satisfied for current opening
hours
 which the same opinions.
To begin
 with, As much as 54 % of full-time
students
 they said were very happy with the
services
,
while
 only 20 % of full-time
students
 had the same view.
In addition
, the survey reported that Almost half of part-time
students
 (45 %) they fill unsatisfied with the
services
. Current opening
hours
,
on the other hand
, as much as 87 % of full-time
students
 said that they are happy with the
services
 offered. It seems similar to part-time
students
 who tend to have the same opinion at 72 % pleased with the
services
. Only 1 % and 5 % of the
students
 are unpleased with the
services
 for the Current opening
hours
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, students, services with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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