The pie charts show the result of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services
The given pie charts illustrate the results of research performed by a university about IT support offered and current opening
hours
with the respondents from full-time and part-time students
in terms of giving opinions about its services
.
Overall
, it can be seen that in terms of giving opinion to IT support offered, most of the full-time students
said they are very happy with the services
offered and it is also
obvious on their satisfied for current opening hours
which the same opinions.
To begin
with, As much as 54 % of full-time students
they said were very happy with the services
, while
only 20 % of full-time students
had the same view. In addition
, the survey reported that Almost half of part-time students
(45 %) they fill unsatisfied with the services
.
Current opening hours
, on the other hand
, as much as 87 % of full-time students
said that they are happy with the services
offered. It seems similar to part-time students
who tend to have the same opinion at 72 % pleased with the services
. Only 1 % and 5 % of the students
are unpleased with the services
for the Current opening hours
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