The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the average

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average

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weekly spending by families in one country,

devide

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divide

divided

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by

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eight different

categorys

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categories

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and compared

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1968 and 2018.

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money

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the money

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are

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spent

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food in 1968,

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changed to leisure

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fifty years

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, the

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of fuel and power

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is keep

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lowest during those fifty years. Looking more closely

in

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figure, we can see that except

the

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type of foods

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35

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of

total

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, there are not notable

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differences

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by

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housing, dressing, fuel, household

using

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, personal

using

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, transport and leisure, because their

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are less than 10

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. In terms

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to

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the figure

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of

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2018, the

higest

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highest

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percentages

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is

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leisure but only

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twenty-two.

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the type of housing, food and transport

following

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followed

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then

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by 14 to 20

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, fuel, dressing, household

pbjects

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projects

,

personal

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objests

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dramaticantly lower

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then

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others, even less than 10

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