The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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A glance at the chart provided reveals the figure of
accident
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accidents
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and
injuries
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per 100 million passenger miles travelled by vehicles, measured in
PMT
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, in 2002.
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, the type of means which has the most passengers who experienced an incident and injury is demand
respond
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response
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. In terms of demand
respond
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response
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, both accidents and
injuries
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had a remarkable proportion of
PMT
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with exactly 240 and 160 respectively.
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, there was a peak in both accidents and
injuries
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in 2002. With regard to light
rail
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and bus,
although
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they had the same amount of
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PMT's
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PMT
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incidents with approximately 75, there were differences in the number of
PMT
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's
injuries
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.
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the former had the amount of
PMT
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under 40, the number of
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PMT
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PMTs
of the latter was merely 60. With respect to commuter
rail
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and heavy
rail
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,
while
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the amount of
PMT
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's commuter
rail
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in both incidents and
injuries
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was nearly equal, that of heavy
rail
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had a slight gap. To be specific, the number of
PMT
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's incidents obtained was exactly 50,
that
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and that
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of
PMT
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's
injuries
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was just around 35.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words injuries, pmt, rail with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Passenger Miles Travelled (PMT)
  • incidents per 100 million PMT
  • injuries per 100 million PMT
  • transportation type
  • comparative measures
  • statistical analysis
  • proportionate level
  • anomalous data
  • discrepancies in safety figures
  • severity of incidents
  • frequency of occurrences
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