The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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A glance at the chart provided reveals the figure of
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accidents
injuries
per 100 million passenger miles travelled by vehicles, measured in Use synonyms
PMT
, in 2002. Use synonyms
Overall
, the type of means which has the most passengers who experienced an incident and injury is demand Linking Words
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.
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, both accidents and Replace the word
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injuries
had a remarkable proportion of Use synonyms
PMT
with exactly 240 and 160 respectively. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there was a peak in both accidents and Linking Words
injuries
in 2002. With regard to light Use synonyms
rail
and bus, Use synonyms
although
they had the same amount of Linking Words
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PMT's
incidents with approximately 75, there were differences in the number of Change noun form
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injuries
. Use synonyms
While
the former had the amount of Linking Words
PMT
under 40, the number of Use synonyms
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PMT
of the latter was merely 60.
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PMTs
rail
and heavy Use synonyms
rail
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while
the amount of Linking Words
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's commuter Use synonyms
rail
in both incidents and Use synonyms
injuries
was nearly equal, that of heavy Use synonyms
rail
had a slight gap. To be specific, the number of Use synonyms
PMT
's incidents obtained was exactly 50, Use synonyms
that
of Correct word choice
and that
PMT
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injuries
was just around 35.Use synonyms
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