The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first chart reveals the percentage of households
owned
Correct pronoun usage
that owned
the
electrical appliances in a certain country Correct article usage
apply
in
between 1920 and 2019, Change preposition
apply
while
the second chart Linking Words
displayed
how much Wrong verb form
displays
time
a household spent on doing housework every week in the same Use synonyms
time
period.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the ownership of all types of electrical appliances increased during Linking Words
this
period, with the refrigerator Linking Words
presented
the highest growth. Meanwhile, the amount of Wrong verb form
presenting
time
for housework had a noticeable decrease.
More detail, the refrigerator reached the largest growth in the Use synonyms
time
period, with nearly 0% of households in 1920 Use synonyms
then
rose to 100% in 2019. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the Vacuum cleaner was the second largest growth, starting with its figure of ownership of 30% and Linking Words
then
Linking Words
climbed
to 100% after 2000. In comparison, washing machines showed the smallest increased feature, with Wrong verb form
climbing
its
number from 40% to about 75% in 2019, Correct pronoun usage
their
whereas
it was the most common of the three electrical appliances in 1920.Linking Words
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