Should the government support artist, such as musicians, writers, and painters? Is it economically beneficial or is it just a waste of money? Why or why not?
Some
people
argue about the impact of artist
life like musicians, writers also
painters and how the Government
have to taking
responsibility as Change the verb
take
support
for their celebrities. May this
is
give more efficient income for the Nations or it will end with Unnecessary verb
apply
overuse
of money without taking any benefit from the Correct article usage
the overuse
artist
. I strongly believe that government
should take responsibility to take care their
well-known Change preposition
of their
people
. This
essay will explant
why the Verb problem
explain
Government
have to give more focus to support
their artist
.
On the other hand
, There are number
of reasons to answer how important Change the article
a number
the number
government
support
for
their Add a missing verb
is for
artist
. Firstly
, Government
may Correct article usage
the Government
can
introduce their strongest to the Remove a modal verb
apply
world
by management
their Replace the word
managing
artist
production. Replace the word
artistic
For instance
, Government
may help musicians Correct article usage
the Government
for
their Change preposition
with
album
publishing to around the Fix the agreement mistake
albums
world
. Due to
this
the musicians will well-being and popular in international
Add an article
the international
an international
world
. Another reasons
is well-known Replace the adjective
reason
people
have biggest
ability to attract Change the article
the biggest
public
. With Add an article
the public
this
condition government
may give more space for their artist
to expand their carrier
. Correct your spelling
careers
However
, this
reason may lead government
to take Add an article
the government
more
simple Add an article
a more
the more
method
to attract their Fix the agreement mistake
methods
people
to do something like new regulation
.
On the other side, there is a great impact for the Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
Government
when they tend to increasing
their Change the verb
increase
artist
product or talent to the Replace the word
artistic
world
. The main beneficial
is Replace the word
benefit
government
may expand their income by Add an article
the government
introduce
their Change the verb form
introducing
Nation
strongest. Change noun form
Nation's
For example
, Government
may use Correct article usage
the Government
this
time to expose their great food, breathtaking view of nature or their culture to the world
by their artist
popularity. Finally
, it will expand their income to the
better financial.
In conclusion, famous Correct article usage
apply
people
is
have Unnecessary verb
apply
an
huge power to handle Change the article
a
public
, that’s why with Correct article usage
the public
support
Correct pronoun usage
their support
them
Correct your spelling
the
Government
may taking
back abundance advantages not only talking about the Wrong verb form
take
artist
popularity but Change noun form
artist's
also
how to build will-develop
nation Add an article
a will-develop
to
their society.Change preposition
apply
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To fully respond to the task, make sure to address all parts of the question sufficiently. Your ideas should be developed comprehensively, with specific examples that clearly demonstrate your argument. Be sure to maintain a balance between supporting artists and discussing the potential economic benefits or drawbacks for the government.
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