With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspaper will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many
people
claim that newspapers will not be read by people
anymore like it was before as the internet
is at its boom. I totally agree with the given statement and the reasons for my agreement will further
be discussed in this
essay.
Firstly
, The internet
has become very accessible with growing technological infrastructure, meaning that the network
infrastructure that is
developing on a daily basis is allowing people
to join the network
connectivity with mobile gadgets. All these have become important and affordable without which one cannot imagine their daily tasks being completed. For example
, even at the store if a person has to make a payment, they are using the internet
to pay the bills using applications on their mobile phones. Hence
, we can claim that each person is very much connected to the network
of devices.
Secondly
, all the information
that is
supposed to be in the newspaper is right on the internet
but in the form of a digital copy. In other words
, the way people
read news in earlier times was way different. They would wait for morning to purchase the newspaper and only then
read the information
related to local, global and other topics. But now, just with a click and every second the data is uploaded and is available to the general public irrespective of the location. All the news or any information
is just available because of network
connectivity. Therefore
, we can easily claim that the Internet
is the solution to getting to know about the happenings of the day at any time and anywhere.
Finally
, I conclude by saying that newspapers are slowly disappearing as the internet
is taking its place. Not only does the internet
provide information
to the people
that the newspaper would have,
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with updates every second. Henceforth, we must always welcome technology that is
advanced by all means.Submitted by badshashaikh840 on
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Your essay lacks complex structures in presenting arguments and can benefit from more variety in sentence structures to enhance readability and flow. Avoid repetitive sentence beginnings and strive to incorporate a diverse range of connectors and discourse markers.
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Make sure to address the prompt fully by discussing both sides of the argument where necessary, even if you are taking a clear stance. Include a counterargument paragraph to show a balanced view before restating your position.