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The graph shows the proportion of 4 different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country

The graph shows the proportion of 4 different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country
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The chart illustrates the percentages of
four
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 distinct materials which were recycled throughout the
period
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 from 1982 to 2010 in a specific country.
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, it can be seen that the percentages of all
four
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 types of materials slightly increased over the
period
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 from 1982 to 2010.But in comparison to Paper &
cardboard
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and cardboard
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 and Glass containers, Aluminium cans and Plastics started their recycling process later, Aluminium cans started
at
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in
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 1986 and Plastics
at
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in
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 1990. Paper & cardboard faced an upward trend from 1982 to 1994, and reached its peak at 80%
at the end
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 of
this
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period
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, before falling steadily to 70% in the following
years
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 Starting from 1982 glass containers were steadily declining up until 1990. In the following
four
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years
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years,
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 it faced
gradual
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a gradual
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increase
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 from 40% to 50%, and after 1994 it continued to
increase
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 reaching its peak of 60% in 2010. Aluminium cans
were
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steadily increased by 20% from 1986 to 1998,
then
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 faced
gradual
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a gradual
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increase
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 starting from 2002 up until 2010, increasing on average by 10%
percent
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per cent
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each
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every
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four
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years
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 and reaching its peak at around 45%. Plastics faced
slight
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a slight
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increase
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 from around 3 % to 9% over the
period
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 of 20
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words four, period, years, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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