Write a letter to the manager. In your letter explain the problems you have had in contacting the company, and explain your dissatisfaction describe the problems with the car tell the manager what you want him to do You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#manager #company #dissatisfaction #car #addresses #sir #madam

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope that you have a good day. I am writing

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letter to you because I have called and left some messages.

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, I haven't heard from your customer service.

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is kind of disappointing,

due to

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any help not provided.

First,

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I would like to address the problems of my

car

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. The main problem is the engineer of my

car

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isn't working anymore, and I really don't know how to fix it.The second problem is the noise of one of the tyres, and it made weird sounds when I was driving my

car

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. Based on my problems and the things that I have done, I definitely need your help to fix my

car

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. I hope that I can receive your response shortly, and hopefully, you can solve these issues with my

car

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. If

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does not cause any inconvenience, would you mind reply me as soon as possible? Kind regards, Lily

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coherence cohesion

Try to organize the points in a more structured manner, clearly separating the problem with customer service and issues with the car.

task achievement

Make sure to clearly state what specific actions you expect from the manager.

suitable writing tone

Polite and formal tone maintained throughout the letter.

task achievement

Clear explanation of the problems encountered, making it easy for the reader to understand the issues.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

157 words

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