The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual Income in 2007, 2011 end 2015. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual Income in 2007, 2011 end 2015.

Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart gives
the
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information about the US’ quantity of
households
based on their annual influx in the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
, the
number
of
households
that had
income
around less than 50.000
dollars
and 75.000
dollars
or more
shown
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erratic over the years,
however
,
households
with
range
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a range
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income
between 50.000 – 74.999
dollars
remained constant throughout the years.
To begin
, the
number
of
households
that had earnings less than 25.000
dollars
and around the
range
of 25.000 to 49.999
dollars
were
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experienced a fluctuation during the periods, with approximately 25 and 28 million toward the
number
of
households
, respectively.
On the other hand
,
households
with
income
in
range
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the range
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of 50.000 to 74.999
dollars
remained unchanged over
the
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times
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,
however
, there
were
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a significant rise and fall
number
of
households
that had
income
between 75.000 and 99.999
dollars
,
as well as
in the
range
of 100.000
dollars
or more.
Furthermore
, the household with
income
at
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the
range
of 100.000
dollars
or more
was
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made the highest part of the
household
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household's
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annual
income
at the
last
of the period in the year 2015.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, number, income, dollars, range with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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