The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual Income in 2007, 2011 end 2015. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual Income in 2007, 2011 end 2015.

Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart gives
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information about the US’ quantity of
households
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based on their annual influx in the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, the
number
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of
households
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that had
income
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around less than 50.000
dollars
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and 75.000
dollars
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or more
shown
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erratic over the years,
however
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,
households
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with
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range
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a range
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income
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between 50.000 – 74.999
dollars
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remained constant throughout the years.
To begin
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, the
number
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of
households
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that had earnings less than 25.000
dollars
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and around the
range
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of 25.000 to 49.999
dollars
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were
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experienced a fluctuation during the periods, with approximately 25 and 28 million toward the
number
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of
households
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, respectively.
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,
households
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with
income
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in
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range
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the range
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of 50.000 to 74.999
dollars
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remained unchanged over
the
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times
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,
however
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, there
were
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a significant rise and fall
number
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of
households
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that had
income
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between 75.000 and 99.999
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,
as well as
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in the
range
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of 100.000
dollars
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or more.
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, the household with
income
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at
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the
range
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of 100.000
dollars
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or more
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made the highest part of the
household
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household's
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annual
income
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at the
last
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of the period in the year 2015.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, number, income, dollars, range with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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