The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric eneragy
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energy
station
. Generaly speaking, the ficilite collect
the Correct subject-verb agreement
collects
water
from river
by Add an article
the river
control
the dam, Wrong verb form
controlling
then
using power
Correct article usage
a power
station
to generate power
, the system also
divided Add a missing verb
is also
by
two different Change preposition
into
timeing
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stages
that
are Correct pronoun usage
which
morning
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the morning
stage
and night
Correct article usage
the night
stage
.
On the one hand, we only can see water
to generate electncity
in Correct your spelling
electricity
morning
Correct article usage
the morning
stage
. In this
prosses
, first the river will Correct your spelling
process
thourgh
Correct your spelling
through
dam
, Correct article usage
a dam
then
flowing
to Wrong verb form
flow
power
Add an article
the power
a power
station
, then
the generator will operate to convert to electricity that we usually used
.
In terms Wrong verb form
use
to
Change preposition
of
night
Correct article usage
the night
stage
, the prosses
will totally reverse Correct your spelling
process
to
the former. Change preposition
apply
Firstly
, the water
from low-level
reservoir will pumped by Add an article
the low-level
power
Add an article
the power
station
, then
flow back to the dictrion about
Change preposition
of
high-level
reservoir. Add an article
the high-level
Secondly
, through the line between power
Add an article
the power
station
and dam
, it will Correct article usage
the dam
keeping
pumping into the intake. Change the verb form
keep
be keeping
Last
but not least, the water
will reach river
in the end.Add an article
the river
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words station, water, power, stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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