The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given is the first bar chart
describing
the proceeds made by exporting Wrong verb form
describes
the
pineapples in 2009 and 2019. Correct article usage
apply
While the
second pie chart Correct word choice
The
showing
the breakdown of Wrong verb form
shows
cost
Correct article usage
the cost
happened
to the customers for each Verb problem
apply
pineapple
.
From an overall
perspective, there are three main countries mentioned to have the most pineapples exported. Besides
, there are also
seven types of expenses for the pineapple
’s consumers.
As we can see, in 2009, country
B sent out more than 4 million
metric tonnes of pineapple
production for export. However
, the
Correct article usage
apply
country
A reached the highest point at 10 million
metric tons, which increased nine times compared to 2009. When the pineapple
exports of countries A and B were at 1 million
or more, the pineapple
sent to another country
for sales of country
C in both 2009 and 2019 stayed stably at approximately 1 million
.
Regarding the chart, which represents the breakdown of cost
to the shoppers for each Add an article
the cost
pineapple
, the types of pineapples were classified into seven types. Distribution and retail accounted for more than one-third of all the costs. Furthermore
, the second rank belonged to profit funds recently, which account for 18% of the total cost. Moreover
, 16% and 10% are occupied by tax services and import licenses. Finally
, all the budgets for producers and exports added up to about 9%.Submitted by dohuyhoang on
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