You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. In the letter, you should: • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints
Dear Sit/Madam
My name is Vaani. I am writing
this
letter to express the
dissatisfaction Change the word
my
about
the Change preposition
with
room
service, I received in
Change preposition
at
express hotel
Correct your spelling
Express Hotel
while
staying there last
week.
First,
when I arrived there my room
was not ready and I had to wait for 30 minutes. But I booked the room
online in advance for one week. Also
, the Wi-Fi connection was really poor and when I called reception
desk to check if there Correct article usage
the reception
is
any Wrong verb form
was
another
private wifi connection nobody really responded nicely. Correct quantifier usage
other
Apart from
this
, the mini -refrigerator
was not working in our Correct your spelling
mini-refrigerator
room
either.
I would like you to improve the issues I faced and also
give me some sort of discount for our next visit.
Looking forward for
your response.
Regards
VaaniChange preposition
to
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Greeting
Ensure to use the correct salutation; 'Dear Sit/Madam' should be 'Dear Sir/Madam.' Pay close attention to spelling and punctuation.
Paragraphing
While providing the main content of the letter, organize your complaints in clearly separated paragraphs to enhance readability.
Content Detail
Make sure to include the details of your stay to fulfill the task requirement such as the dates and the room number.
Response Completion
To achieve a balanced response, after listing the issues, suggest possible solutions or actions you would like the hotel to take, in addition to a discount on a future stay.
Closing
The sign-off of the letter should be formal. 'Looking forward for your response' should be 'Looking forward to your response'.
Cohesion
Remember to divide different ideas into separate paragraphs to aid the reader in following your points.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite