The bar graph above shows average earnings in the Republic of Ireland in 5 different years, with projections for the future. Earnings are in US dollars
The graph illustrates
overall
earnings which represented US dollars
in 5 variable years in the Republic of Ireland, with forecasts for the future.
Overview, the year 2018’s overall
value
salaries were the highest among the 5 different years. The lowest average fee was exhibited in 1968 at just below 8,000 dollars
, approximately 7,000 dollars
, which can differ with
13,000 Change preposition
from
dollars
from 2018’s value
of overall
pays
.
After Fix the agreement mistake
pay
the
decades the number of salaries Correct article usage
apply
reach
the peak of around 10,000 Wrong verb form
reached
dollars
in the Republic of Ireland. This
trend continued until 2008, throughout the period the value
of average earnings could increase
to 14,000 Wrong verb form
increased
dollars
and 15,000 dollars
respectively in 1988 and 1998. The value
of 2008 overall
pay plummeted to 13,000 after the subsequent increase. Significant
upward trend happened in 10 Correct article usage
A significant
year
, and Change to a plural noun
years
value
of salary wildly upward until Correct article usage
the value
reach
Wrong verb form
reached
the
20,000 Correct article usage
apply
dollars
, which could not see
Wrong verb form
be seen
the
50 years period in the Republic of Ireland.Change preposition
in the
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