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Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted You do NOT need to write any address.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to seek your permission to give a presentation. For a few days, I have been thinking that we should start working towards making our ongoing projects more intelligent by integrating it with Artificial Intelligence. Nowadays, everyone is talking about chatGPT and Bard from Google, and how it is making the life of a developer easier. To understand
it
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in depth about these technologies, I was planning to give a presentation on the fundamentals of AI and its use cases. The slides will consist of a structure of Machine Learning, AI, and how it is being used these days in other industries.
Additionally
, I will
also
 discuss how we can resolve our current problems by making the software more intelligent and advanced. We can conduct
this
 event in our town hall where we have a capacity of more than 100 people as we need all the Cloud Engineers
along with
 the Developers of different teams to attend
this
 presentation. Yours faithfully, Neha
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task achievement
Consider including a closing statement that reiterates the importance or benefit of the presentation. This can further strengthen your task response.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph could be expanded slightly to give more details and ensure that each idea is fully developed. For example, you could briefly elaborate on the practical applications in each topic you're covering.
coherence cohesion
Your letter is well-structured with clear paragraphs each serving a distinct purpose.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately polite, maintaining a formal tone throughout.
task achievement
You have clearly stated the presentation topics, the intended audience, the location, and the objective of the presentation.
task achievement
Your tone is respectful and professional, which is very suitable for a letter to a manager.
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