The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the 10 countries which
consume
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and
produce
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produced
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more
electricy
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electricity
in 2014.
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,
consumption
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and
production
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of electricity are very similar in every
country
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.
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China and the United States are the ones that
produces
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and produce and use the most. China is the
country
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that had the highest electricity
production
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, and
consumption
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, with 5,398
billion
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kWh
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and 5,322
billion
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kWh
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respectively, which are around 1,300
billion
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kWh
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and 1,400
billion
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kWh
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higher than the
second ranked
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country
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, namely the United States, producing 4,099
billion
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kWh
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and consuming 3,866
billion
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kWh
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. Russia ranked
third,
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but it had only one-fourth of the
kWh
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produced and consumed by the United States. Japan and
India
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India's
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electricity
production
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and
consumption
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were between 940
billion
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kWh
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and 700
billion
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kWh
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, ranking fourth and fifth. Germany is the only
country
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that has more
consumption
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than
production
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; producing 526.6
billion
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kWh
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and consuming 582.5
billion
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kWh
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.
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, the other countries have a similar amount of
production
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and
consumption
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, which is between 620
billion
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kWh
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and 450
billion
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kWh
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, production, country, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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