The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the 10 countries which
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produce
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produced
electricy
in 2014.
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electricity
Overall
, Linking Words
consumption
and Use synonyms
production
of electricity are very similar in every Use synonyms
country
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While
China and the United States are the ones that Linking Words
produces
and produce and use the most.
China is the Change the verb form
produce
country
that had the highest electricity Use synonyms
production
, and Use synonyms
consumption
, with 5,398 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
and 5,322 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
respectively, which are around 1,300 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
and 1,400 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
higher than the Use synonyms
second ranked
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second-ranked
country
, namely the United States, producing 4,099 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
and consuming 3,866 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
. Russia ranked Use synonyms
third,
but it had only one-fourth of the Linking Words
kWh
produced and consumed by the United States.
Japan and Use synonyms
India
electricity Change noun form
India's
production
and Use synonyms
consumption
were between 940 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
and 700 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
, ranking fourth and fifth. Germany is the only Use synonyms
country
that has more Use synonyms
consumption
than Use synonyms
production
; producing 526.6 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
and consuming 582.5 Use synonyms
billion
Use synonyms
kWh
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the other countries have a similar amount of Linking Words
production
and Use synonyms
consumption
, which is between 620 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
and 450 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
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