The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the 10 countries which
consume
Wrong verb form
consumed
show examples
and
produce
Wrong verb form
produced
show examples
more
electricy
Correct your spelling
electricity
in 2014.
Overall
,
consumption
and
production
of electricity are very similar in every
country
.
While
China and the United States are the ones that
produces
Change the verb form
produce
show examples
and produce and use the most. China is the
country
that had the highest electricity
production
, and
consumption
, with 5,398
billion
kWh
and 5,322
billion
kWh
respectively, which are around 1,300
billion
kWh
and 1,400
billion
kWh
higher than the
second ranked
Add a hyphen
second-ranked
show examples
country
, namely the United States, producing 4,099
billion
kWh
and consuming 3,866
billion
kWh
. Russia ranked
third,
but it had only one-fourth of the
kWh
produced and consumed by the United States. Japan and
India
Change noun form
India's
show examples
electricity
production
and
consumption
were between 940
billion
kWh
and 700
billion
kWh
, ranking fourth and fifth. Germany is the only
country
that has more
consumption
than
production
; producing 526.6
billion
kWh
and consuming 582.5
billion
kWh
.
Moreover
, the other countries have a similar amount of
production
and
consumption
, which is between 620
billion
kWh
and 450
billion
kWh
.
Submitted by elenazheng1211 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, production, country, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
What to do next:
Look at other essays: