IETLS Writing Test - The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below illustrates

snatching

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the snatching

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of the per

thounds

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thousands

vehicles

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in four nations

betweenn

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between

1990 and 1999.

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, It can be seen that every country has had more than 5

vehicles

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snatched per thousand

vehicles

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between

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within

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the given time frame.

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, from

outset

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the outset

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1990

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of 1990

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both

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Great

Britain

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and

Sweden

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had

most

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the most

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cases of stolen

vehicles

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, which is approximately 17 and 9 respectively.

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1991

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1991,

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Sweden

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showed slight improvement, whilst Great

Britain

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's numbers kept climbing.

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, after 1991

Sweden

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showed no improvement and in 1996 the numbers reached

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apply

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around 13.

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Britain

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perfomance

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performance

tremendously improved as in 1994 it reached its all-time low number of that time, which

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was

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around 16.

Sweden

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between 1996 to 1998 maintained constant

figures

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of around 13.

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reaching

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it reached

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14 the highest the nation has had in 9 years.

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Britain

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's number after 1994 worsened reaching 20 in 1997,

then

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astounding developments resulted in

Britain

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reaching 16.

Both

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the

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apply

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France and

the

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apply

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Canada

has

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have

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relatively better

figures

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than

both

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Britain

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and

Sweden

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. From the beginning,

1990

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of 1990

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, Canada had thefts of around 7

vehicles

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per 1000

vehicle

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vehicles

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, meanwhile, France had 6.

Both

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nations faced many ups and downs between 1990 and 1999, France reaching its all-time lowest

figures

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of 6 in 1993,

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Canada

reaching

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reached

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its

all time

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all-time

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low

figures

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of 5, two times, in 1994 and 1998. In the end,

Both

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the nations had same number of thefts per 1000

vehicle

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vehicles

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, which is around 6.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, subsequently".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles, both, britain, sweden, figures with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

246 words

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