IETLS Writing Test - The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below illustrates

snatching

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the snatching

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of the per

thounds

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thousands

vehicles

in four nations

betweenn

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between

1990 and 1999.

Overall

, It can be seen that every country has had more than 5

vehicles

snatched per thousand

vehicles

between

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within

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the given time frame.

Firstly

, from

outset

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the outset

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1990

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of 1990

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both

Great

Britain

and

Sweden

had

most

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the most

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cases of stolen

vehicles

, which is approximately 17 and 9 respectively.

Then

1991

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1991,

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Sweden

showed slight improvement, whilst Great

Britain

's numbers kept climbing.

Subsequently

, after 1991

Sweden

showed no improvement and in 1996 the numbers reached

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apply

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around 13.

On the other hand

Britain

perfomance

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performance

tremendously improved as in 1994 it reached its all-time low number of that time, which

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was

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around 16.

Sweden

between 1996 to 1998 maintained constant

figures

of around 13.

Subsequently

reaching

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it reached

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14 the highest the nation has had in 9 years.

Whereas

Britain

's number after 1994 worsened reaching 20 in 1997,

then

astounding developments resulted in

Britain

reaching 16.

Both

the

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apply

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France and

the

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apply

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Canada

has

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have

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relatively better

figures

than

both

Britain

and

Sweden

. From the beginning,

1990

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of 1990

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, Canada had thefts of around 7

vehicles

per 1000

vehicle

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vehicles

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, meanwhile, France had 6.

Both

nations faced many ups and downs between 1990 and 1999, France reaching its all-time lowest

figures

of 6 in 1993,

On the other hand

Canada

reaching

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reached

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its

all time

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all-time

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low

figures

of 5, two times, in 1994 and 1998. In the end,

Both

the nations had same number of thefts per 1000

vehicle

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vehicles

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, which is around 6.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, subsequently".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles, both, britain, sweden, figures with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

246 words

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IETLS Writing Test - The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

People who damage public property, such as buildings or statues should be required to do community service (such as cleaning parks) as a punishment rather than other forms of punishment (such as paying a fine or going to prison). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people work long hour, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?