IETLS Writing Test - The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates
snatching
of the per Correct article usage
the snatching
thounds
Correct your spelling
thousands
vehicles
in four nations betweenn
1990 and 1999. Correct your spelling
between
Overall
, It can be seen that every country has had more than 5 vehicles
snatched per thousand vehicles
between
the given time frame.
Change preposition
within
Firstly
, from outset
, Correct article usage
the outset
1990
, Change preposition
of 1990
both
Great Britain
and Sweden
had most
cases of stolen Correct article usage
the most
vehicles
, which is approximately 17 and 9 respectively. Then
in 1991
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1991,
Sweden
showed slight improvement, whilst Great Britain
's numbers kept climbing. Subsequently
, after 1991 Sweden
showed no improvement and in 1996 the numbers reached to
around 13. Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, Britain
's perfomance
tremendously improved as in 1994 it reached its all-time low number of that time, which Correct your spelling
performance
is
around 16. Wrong verb form
was
Sweden
between 1996 to 1998 maintained constant figures
of around 13. Subsequently
, reaching
14 the highest the nation has had in 9 years. Wrong verb form
it reached
Whereas
, Britain
's number after 1994 worsened reaching 20 in 1997, then
astounding developments resulted in Britain
reaching 16.
Both
the
France and Correct article usage
apply
the
Canada Correct article usage
apply
has
relatively better Correct subject-verb agreement
have
figures
than both
Britain
and Sweden
. From the beginning,1990
, Canada had thefts of around 7 Change preposition
of 1990
vehicles
per 1000 vehicle
, meanwhile, France had 6. Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
Both
nations faced many ups and downs between 1990 and 1999, France reaching its all-time lowest figures
of 6 in 1993, On the other hand
Canada reaching
its Wrong verb form
reached
all time
low Add a hyphen
all-time
figures
of 5, two times, in 1994 and 1998. In the end, Both
the nations had same number of thefts per 1000 vehicle
, which is around 6.Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, subsequently".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles, both, britain, sweden, figures with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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