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The bar chart shows changes in the amount of coffee produced in Brazil, Columbia, Indonesia and Vietnam.

The bar chart shows changes in the amount of coffee produced in Brazil, Columbia, Indonesia and Vietnam.
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The bar chart shows changes in the amount of
coffee
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 produced in Brazil, Columbia, Indonesia and
Vietnam
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.
Overall
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, Brazil produced the most
coffee
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 out of all 4 countries in any
years
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year
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,
while
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Vietnam
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 tended to produce the least amounts.
Besides
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, Columbia was the only country whose
coffee
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 production declined over the period.
In1990
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In 1990
, Brazi produced approximately 0.7
million
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tons
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 of
coffee
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, which was more than 3 times greater than that of Indonesia and
Vietnam
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, at 0.2
million
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 and 0.1
million
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 respectively. Production continued to increase in Brazil, Indonesia and
Vietnam
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 over the measured period to reach 1.9
million
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, 0.4
million
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 and 0.3
million
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tons
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 of
coffee
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 respectively by 2010. Despite the fact that
,
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 Columbia saw a decrease in
coffee
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 production over
this
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 period. In 1990, the country produced 0.6
million
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tons
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 of
coffee
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, which gradually fell to 0.3
million
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tons
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 of
coffee
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 by 2010.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, vietnam, million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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