Academic-Task1 The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the

sugar

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production procedure from

sugar

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canes

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cane

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. Looking from an

overall

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perspective, it is

readly

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readily

really

ready

apparant

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apparent

that,

this

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linear manufacturing process consists

with

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of

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major seven stages. It starts from cultivating

of

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apply

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sugar

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canes

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cane

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and

end

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ends

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up with

sugar

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as a finished good.

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with,

sugar

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cane cultivation takes 12-18 months

for

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to

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complete the

grown

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growth

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. There are two different ways available

for

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to

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conduct harvesting.

The heavy

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Heavy

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machineries

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machinery

types of machinery

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or human

being

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beings

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are used

for

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to

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complete the job. After that, harvested

canes

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under go

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undergo

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the production process. The crushing machines are responsible for

extract

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extracting

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juice from

canes

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. Later,

obtained

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the obtained

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juice is gone through a purification process using a Limestone filter. The fifth step is making syrup by

the

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apply

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evaporation.

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, heat is utilized as the energy

sorce

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source

which is required to operate the Evaporator.

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, the separation step

is taken

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takes

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place through a Centrifuge which is responsible

to separate

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for separating

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sugar

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crystals from

sugar

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syrup. At the final

stage

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stage,

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sugar

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can be obtained as a finished product after the drying and cooling.