Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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development

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children, because the smartphone can'

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technology changed the active

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speed of technology has faster and faster

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before, the average

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the

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products are cost down quickly, so most people can afford to buy the newest products,

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that

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have one. In more detail, there are more schools

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using

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to connect children, it obviously become a life skill that you

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have.

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is the rise of social media.

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amount of people have a smartphone when I was

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too much time

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that

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with

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, when I went to high school in 2016 there were everyone using social media like Facebook and Instagram at school, because we can avoid the

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, in which you can place the

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development is full of

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of social media, it doesn'

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mean you can always escape from

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