Littering in cities is an increasing problem which needs to be dealt with. Some people think that steeper fines is the best way to deal with the problem. To what extent do you agree?

The rising number of

waste

in the

cities

become a big problem and the

governtment

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government

needs a good strategy to deal with

this

global issue. Some

people

argue that increasing the nominal of

fines

will be

effective

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an effective

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way to reduce

litters

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litter

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.

However

, I totally disagree with

this

opinion, because

litters

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litter

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in the city cannot be avoided and it would be difficult to implement

this

regulation. First and

formost

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foremost

for most

, the growth of

human

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the human

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population in

cities

will always increase year by year

due to

the

brain draining

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brain-draining

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phenomenon.

This

case

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causes

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cause

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causes

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an increasing

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increasing

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an increasing

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number of litter especially household

waste

like food, plastics, and detergents.

By forcing

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people

to pay

the

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apply

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fines

will not

give

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have

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any positive impacts

for

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on

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this

problem, since the consumers of

daily

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dairy

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products in the city will grow rapidly as high as the increasing human population.

For example

, there are more than 500000

people

in the productive age category who migrate from rural areas to Jakarta (a metropolitan city in Indonesia) each year,

as

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and as

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a

result

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result,

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its yearly

litters

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litter

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increase

almost

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by almost

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10%. So, steeping

fines

could not

use

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be used

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as a way to reduce

the

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apply

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litters

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litter

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, because it will always grow equally with the human population.

Second,

it is not easy to control the implementation of

this

police

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policy

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because the

enomerous

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numerous

people

who live in

cities

are unequal

compered

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compared

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with

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to

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the number of

polices

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police

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or public officers who can

surpervise

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supervise

this

rule.

The another

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reason is unawearness of the

degerous

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danger

of over-

waste

pollution,

as a result

,

less

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fewer

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people

implement zero

waste

in their daily life activities,

for instance

, using shopping bags rather than single-used plastic. Those two reasons indicate that

fines

is

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not applicable to fix

this

waste

problem.

To sum up

, adding amount of

fines

will not

much

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helpful for dealing with littering in

cities

. The alternative solution that the government can do is

create

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to create

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a system to manage all

this

litters

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litter

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to become other

produts

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products

or it is

also

possibe

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possible

to change that into energy.