The graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the Uk.
The graph provides information about four internal innovations in the UK over a span of 7 years. It is evident that, throughout the entire period, all lines experienced an upward trend, and the most popular electronic gadget was the CD player.
In the initial years, CD player consumption started at 60% and steadily increased to 80%.
In contrast
, there was no internet access in 1996/97, and in the following year, internet connection rose to 10%, eventually reaching 45% by the end of the graph.
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, the mobile phone exhibited the most fluctuation among the devices. Personal phone usage was approximately 10% lower than home computer usage in 1996/97, but by 2002/03, mobile phones overtook and reached 70%.Linking Words
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