The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United 

Kingdom from January to June
The
line
graph illustrates the
requests
for information at a visitor office in a nation during a half year. In general,
although
the
number
of
requests
in person is the highest among these categories, the level of it by letter/email is the lowest.
Additionally
, both
requests
in person and by telephone are a significant increase from the first year. The
line
of
in-personperson
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in-person person
in-person-person
was the lowest
number
in January, at 400.
However
, the highest
number
among the three figures is in person with nearly 2000 after 6 months.
In addition
,
this
line
increased from 200 to 400 per month through these years. The
line
of
requests
by telephone with approximately 1000 in January, which was the highest
number
, is a remarkable growth in June, at a second rate (1600). In marked contrast, the red
line
which by letter/email was the second highest
number
at around 800, is the lowest
number
in June at under 400
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