The maps below show the centre of a small town called (slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two maps depict the existing condition of the Islip town
centre
and the planning development of the city centre
in the near future.
Overall
, it can be seen that the noticeable changes for the future are dominated by the construction of new public facilities and residential areas
.
To begin
, the Islip town centre
nowadays only has one main road. However
, the government is planning to build a dual carriageway for vehicles. In addition
, it can be seen that there will be new pedestrian areas
which divide the Islip town centre
into two parts equally (northern and southern areas
). Other than that, there will be many new public facilities in the next years, such
as bus station, shopping centre
, car park
, and more. Most of them will be constructed in the north area.
On the contrary
, the school, park
, and several housings remain the same in general. However
, there will be additional residential areas
beside the park
on the south and next to the car park
on the northeast. Additionally
, it should be highlighted that there will be a plan for reducing the park
to a smaller size.Submitted by floriehendr on
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