the diagrams below shows a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

Grange

Park

was opened in 1920, a rectangular

area

with access from Arnold Avenue on the north side and from Eldon Street on the south side. There was a fountain in the centre, with a stage for musicians situated centre left, a glasshouse to the right of the Eldon Street entrance and a pond for

water

plants in the northeast corner opposite. Around the edges of the

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there were rose gardens, with seats nearby for people to smell the flowers and listen to music. The

park

has altered considerably since

then

. Now there is one

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rose garden, occupying the central

area

where the fountain stood,

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with seats all around it. One of the smaller rose gardens remains on the north side of the

park

. The bandstand (stage for musicians) has

also

been replaced, by an amphitheatre for concerts and associated seating. The glasshouse has gone and in its

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is a

water

feature;

similarly

, where the pond for

water

plants stood there is now a children’s play

area

with a café nearby. Access to the

park

is still via the original entrances, but there is now a third entrance near the

water

feature from an underground car

park

. Despite the apparently significant changes, the

park

retains the basic elements of flowers,

water

, seating and music, with the addition of a café and a children’s play

area

.