the diagrams below shows a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

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was opened in 1920, a rectangular

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with access from Arnold Avenue on the north side and from Eldon Street on the south side. There was a fountain in the centre, with a stage for musicians situated centre left, a glasshouse to the right of the Eldon Street entrance and a pond for

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plants in the northeast corner opposite. Around the edges of the

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there were rose gardens, with seats nearby for people to smell the flowers and listen to music. The

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has altered considerably since

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. Now there is one

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rose garden, occupying the central

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where the fountain stood,

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with seats all around it. One of the smaller rose gardens remains on the north side of the

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. The bandstand (stage for musicians) has

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been replaced, by an amphitheatre for concerts and associated seating. The glasshouse has gone and in its

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is a

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feature;

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, where the pond for

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plants stood there is now a children’s play

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with a café nearby. Access to the

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is still via the original entrances, but there is now a third entrance near the

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feature from an underground car

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. Despite the apparently significant changes, the

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retains the basic elements of flowers,

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, seating and music, with the addition of a café and a children’s play

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