The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The site plan below illustrates the changes and developments of the Templeton seaside resort environmental condition that has been done between 1990 and 2005 period.
Overall
, it can be seen that the most major land development would be the addition of two new transportation modes shown through the new airport and ferry pier, and some newly built buildings for various utilities.
The two new transportation modes are located on the opposite side of the map
. In the north area of Templeton, the new airport is located inside the same block as the school building, having a river-side view as it is placed on the east of the river itself. Meanwhile, the ferry pier is located on the south of the map
, on the perimeter of the beach, and also
connected with the railway
path.
The map
also
shows several other newly constructed buildings, with the usage ranging from small houses, apartments
, a supermarket, and a factory. The new residential buildings such
as houses and apartments
, are scattered throughout the map
, located in several land pockets. There are five newly built apartments
with two located near the lake, and the rest of them in the south area near the railway
and beach. Coincidentally, the new supermarket is built just across the beach-side apartments
. Lastly
, the factory is
erected near the Wrong verb form
was
railway
station and ferry pier, which in turn resulted in the green pocket of vegetation near the railway
station being demolished to make space for the factory building.Submitted by febrinhidayat on
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