The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries. The use of water by four different countries (%).
The table compares four countries, including
Egypt
, Saudi
Arabia
, New Zealand
, and Canada
in terms of their water
usage for three distinct purposes.
Overall
, it is clear that
Egypt
uses the most water
for agriculture. Another striking feature is that water
for domestic use is the lowest in almost four countries.
Regarding domestic use, the respective amount of water
usage in Saudi
Arabia
and Egypt
is only 6% and 8%, while
that in Canada
is 20%, double the proportion of that in New Zealand
, with 10%. Looking at industry water
usage, Canada
is the highest, with 70%, exceeding that of New Zealand
, Saudi
Arabia
and Egypt
, 46%, 30% and 10% respectively.
Agriculture is the field that needs the most water
in Egypt
and Saudi
Arabia
, with 82% and 64% corresponding. Furthermore
, New Zealand
is ranked third,
with 44%. By contrast
, Canada
uses a mere 10% of water
for this
purpose.Submitted by miatr.work on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words egypt, saudi, arabia, zealand, canada, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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