The diagram below shows how apple juice is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates how the process of producing
apple
juice takes places
.
In general, Fix the agreement mistake
place
this
process includes 11 steps
in
which the first four Change preposition
apply
steps
involve preparing the ingredient
, the next four Fix the agreement mistake
ingredients
steps
are the main parts with complicated technologies, and the last
3 steps
include packaging and distribution.
Specifically, the preparatory stage begins with harvesting and selecting the best apples from the trees. After going through an automatic belt and being washed and sorted at step
2, the apples are sliced in an apple
grinder at step
3. Next,
the apple
slices are stored in a wooden bucket.
At stage 5, the apple
slices are put into a pressing machine where water is separated from the apple
by a centrifuge. Afterwards, the apple
goes through a system of boilers and pipes where aroma is added. Steps
7 and 8 involve filtration and pasteurization at 80 degrees Celsius respectively.
At
Change preposition
In
step
9, the apple
juice is poured into bottles which are previously labeled
. Change the spelling
labelled
At
the two final Change preposition
In
steps
, the bottles are packed into cardboard boxes before being delivered by lorries, and the process finishes at this
step
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