The diagrams show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.
The illustration displays a
museum
and the alternations in its setting in the years 1990 and in
2010
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Overall
, it is readily apparent that there were significant changes made in the museum
. Stores were expanded, and eating places and other activities were added. But the main road
, store room, and the entrance to the exhibition
room stayed the same in both the years.
In 1990, the exhibition
center
had more rooms that contained separate doors for each. Beside the entrance, to the eastern side, was the car park and garden with a Change the spelling
centre
road
attached to it, going towards the main road
in the south of the museum
. On the north side of the main road
, a cottage was constructed. In addition
, on the northern part of the museum
was a garden surrounded by trees.
In 2010, the shop in the exhibition
area
was expanded and 2 of the rooms were renovated to 1 large room. On the eastern side, the car park was extended to a larger parking area
where the road
attached to it was leading towards the bigger road
. The cottage was converted into a cafe in the northern area
of the road
. However
, the garden at the north of the museum
and the store inside the exhibition
area
remained the same as well as
the path and the entrance.Submitted by amnahazfar03 on
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