The diagrams show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.

The diagrams show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010.
The illustration displays a
museum
and the alternations in its setting in the years 1990 and
in
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2010
Overall
, it is readily apparent that there were significant changes made in the
museum
. Stores were expanded, and eating places and other activities were added. But the main
road
, store room, and the entrance to the
exhibition
room stayed the same in both the years. In 1990, the
exhibition
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had more rooms that contained separate doors for each. Beside the entrance, to the eastern side, was the car park and garden with a
road
attached to it, going towards the main
road
in the south of the
museum
. On the north side of the main
road
, a cottage was constructed.
In addition
, on the northern part of the
museum
was a garden surrounded by trees. In 2010, the shop in the
exhibition
area
was expanded and 2 of the rooms were renovated to 1 large room. On the eastern side, the car park was extended to a larger parking
area
where the
road
attached to it was leading towards the bigger
road
. The cottage was converted into a cafe in the northern
area
of the
road
.
However
, the garden at the north of the
museum
and the store inside the
exhibition
area
remained the same
as well as
the path and the entrance.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, road, exhibition, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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