The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012.
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production
of electricity by renewable sources in 4 periods in Trillion Watt Hours (TWH)
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the production
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, the vast majority are host to hydraulic
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in 2011 . whilst bio-mass showed 307.5. The others, geothermal and solar, had the lowest sum . 67.4 and 21 releavently. In the end, in 2012 both of them had added , first of them Verb problem
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