Schools are no longer needed because students could find so much information on the Internet and study at home. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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of people believe that

schools

are no longer needed because

students

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find

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a lot of

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information

on the Internet.

However

, in my opinion,

schools

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others.

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,

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direct interaction in

schools

is always an important aspect. Offline

class

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classes

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can help to improve the communication between

students

and teachers, developing the relationship with other

students

.

For example

, in

schools

, people can interact with others based on a number of methods

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contact, hand gestures, voices and other body

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.

Accordingly

,

students

in offline

class

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easily absorb

knowledges

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knowledge

pieces of knowledge

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.

Secondly

, teachers in

schools

are always trusted sources.

For instance

,

bacholer

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bachelor

cetificate

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certificate

is the minimum requirement for

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teachers

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in primary

schools

, and

college

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a college

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certificate is a minimum requirement for

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teachers

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in preschools.

Therefore

, learners can solve their issues quickly by asking

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, learners can

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follow the study path because of the professional sources in

schools

. On the other

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, some people assume that

schools

are no longer needed because of the diverse sources of

information

on the internet.

However

,

this

source

are

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not always true because the

information

in

this

can be generated from anyone.

For example

, blog posts often show personal views and the bloggers can be a master or not.

Hence

, learners may

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when

following

this

source

.

Consequently

,

this

source

may not capture the full truth and it can not

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the

schools

. In conclusion, there are many exclusive benefits of learning in

schools

such

as

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and trusted

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sources

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source

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of

information

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improving

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the

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communication. We should keep forward

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type of learning to

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future.