The maps below show the centre of a small town called (slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Two maps compare today's outline of a town centre and its planned development.

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, almost every part of the site will be changed and circled by a dual carriageway.

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, a way dedicated merely to pedestrians will replace the main road and the stores on the north side of the main road will be modified into a bus station, a shopping centre, a car park, and a new housing.

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, there are several buildings whose locations will remain unchanged like the shops on the south part of the main road, the school, and the park.

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, the residencies will have minor alterations in terms of location. The first one which is currently located exactly in the south area of the shops will be moved to the southwest of the area and will align with the newly built housing facility which will be in the western region of the park,

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the second one will be relocated to the east and precisely on the south side of the carriageway.

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urban planning
town centre
development
infrastructure
residential
commercial
pedestrian
amenities
refurbishment
green spaces
public transport
conservation
modernization
facilities
expansion
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The maps below show the centre of a small town called (slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Discussion Some people get into debt buying things they don’t need and can’t ‎afford.What are the reasons for this behaviour?What action can be taken ‎to prevent people having this problem?‎

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?