The bar chart provides information about how often people in the USA spent ate fast food from 2003 to 2013.
The bar chart illustrates the consumption of fast
feed
in the USA between 2003 and 2013.
Replace the word
food
Overall
, many community
Change to a plural noun
communities
visited
Wrong verb form
visit
a
junk food Correct article usage
apply
restaurant
at least once a week or one or two times a month. Despite that, in most cases, figures were reduced throughout the period.Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
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