The diagram show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010

The diagram show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The map illustrates how a museum and its surroundings changed between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
Linking Words
, the indoor
area
Use synonyms
displayed more significant improvements compared with the outdoor
area
Use synonyms
.
In addition
Linking Words
, there were fewer
exhibition
Use synonyms
rooms in 2010 than in 1900. In 1990, there was a cottage in the bottom left-hand
corner
Use synonyms
of the museum, right next to the main road but
this
Linking Words
part/space was converted to a cafe in 2010. In the wider
area
Use synonyms
right above the cottage in 1990, there were 4
exhibition
Use synonyms
rooms, a shop in the bottom right-hand
corner
Use synonyms
and a store
room
Use synonyms
in the top-left-hand
corner
Use synonyms
. In 2010,
although
Linking Words
all the rooms kept the same function, the shop was expanded to the
exhibition
Use synonyms
room
Use synonyms
next door and there was a large
exhibition
Use synonyms
room
Use synonyms
in the top right-hand
corner
Use synonyms
which was a
combined
Replace the word
combination
show examples
by
Change preposition
of
show examples
two previous small ones.
By contrast
Linking Words
, the store
room
Use synonyms
remained the same over the studied period. In terms of the outdoor
area
Use synonyms
,
while
Linking Words
the garden in the north/ at the top of the diagram remained unchanged during the time frame, in 2010, the car park in the east was enlarged, taking the place of the garden in the southeast of the museum in 1990.
Submitted by phanhuyhoang278 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words area, exhibition, corner, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: