The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart displays data about total funding treasured by 6 different class

level

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levels

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at King Primary

School's

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Schools

School

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Overall

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, the highest contributor is the first

grade

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while

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the third

grade

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gives

least

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the least

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money for the school event. The highest percentage of school event donations

is come

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comes

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from the first

grade

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with 23.7%, followed by second

grade

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with 20.9% and fifth

grade

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with 18.3% respectively. Those three grades

contributes

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contribute

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more than 60% of total revenue gained. The

least

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lowest

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proportion

is come

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comes

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from third

grade

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with 7.8%, followed by fourth

grade

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with 13.9% and sixth

grade

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with 15.5% respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words grade with synonyms.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

97 words

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The best way to make roads safer is to make vehicle drivers take a driving test each year To what extent do you agree or disagree

Write a letter to accommodation officer at the college to describe your situation, your problems when you are sharing room with another student, say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.