The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart displays data about total funding treasured by 6 different class
level
at King Primary Fix the agreement mistake
levels
School's
.
Change the noun form
Schools
School
Overall
, the highest contributor is the first grade
while
the third grade
gives least
money for the school event.
The highest percentage of school event donations Change the article
the least
is come
from the first Wrong verb form
comes
grade
with 23.7%, followed by second grade
with 20.9% and fifth grade
with 18.3% respectively. Those three grades contributes
more than 60% of total revenue gained.
The Change the verb form
contribute
least
proportion Correct word choice
lowest
is come
from third Wrong verb form
comes
grade
with 7.8%, followed by fourth grade
with 13.9% and sixth grade
with 15.5% respectively.Submitted by ryanrush16 on
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