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The two diagrams below describe changes to a museum's floor plan between 2008 and 2012.

The two diagrams below describe changes to a museum's floor plan between 2008 and 2012.
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The two maps illustrate some developments to a museum's sketch
plan
 in the
year
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years
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of
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apply
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2008 to 2012. In
overwiew
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overview
, there were great improvements between
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the year
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year
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years
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 2008 and 2012,
this
 is clearly
showed
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shown
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 with fewer
number of
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apply
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buildings compared to many in a period of four years.
To begin
 with,
terrace
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a terrace
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 and restaurant was added to the
plan
, since in 2008 there
were
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was
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not
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no
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such
 thing,
therefore
,
this
 is clear that
modificatins
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modifications
 were
done
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made
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.Another development was experienced in 2012,
this
 is when a lift was introduced to make it easier to reach the fourth floor.In 2008, there was only
1st
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 and 2nd floor, so
to use
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using
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elevator
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the elevator
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 was not
neccessary
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necessary
.
Furthermore
,
Reception
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the Reception
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 and Cloak Room became a single room
inorder
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in order
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 to create a space for
children's
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a children's
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 playground,
as a result
 of
this
, in 2012 a high-rise
plan
 was formed.
Lastly
,
Self-service
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the Self-service
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 cafe
also
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was also
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attouched
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attached
 to the floor
plan
,
this
 was done to avoid dry mouth when people
visted
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visited
 the museum and other buildings
such
 as
Gallery
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the Gallery
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 and
remain
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remained
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 unchanged.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plan with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Floor plan
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Spatial distribution
  • Accessibility
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit
  • Gallery
  • Interactive displays
  • Historical artifacts
  • Educational facilities
  • Visitor amenities
  • Foot traffic
  • Layout alteration
  • Modernize
  • Gift shop
  • Cafeteria
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