The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The provide bar chart reveals the amount of
households
in the US by the five categories of their annual
income
in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, The
households
earning at least 100,000 displayed the largest figure more than others in both of the three years. Meanwhile, the remainning brackests of
households
presented the relatively steady feature, except to a noticeable fluctuation in 2011. More detail, the largest
group
of
households
with their
income
range
at least 100,000 presented the largest amount in the chart, with a
range
of roughly 30% and about 35% in 2007 and 2015, respectively,
although
there was a slight fluctuation in 2011.
In addition
, in these three years, the middle
income
group
of
households
with its earning
range
between $5,0000 to 99,999, and the lowest
income
group
of
households
of the
range
no more than 49,999 displayed the lowest and second largest result, respectively.
However
, in 2011, the amount of the lowest
income
group
was more than the largest
group
, with its result of nearly 30%, which is more than the number of roughly 27% of the largest
group
.
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