The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.
The bar chart depicts the number of places in hospitals in 8 countries and the table shows
expenses
of Japan, the Correct article usage
the expenses
Netherlands
and the US in the health sector and the average expectations of life.
According to
the bar chart, coating takes a leading position in quality
of hospital beds with 14 places per thousand Correct article usage
the quality
of
people. Equating to 8 cot, Germany takes the second position, forming a significant gap with six other countries Change preposition
apply
which
number of hospital places varies from 3 to 5 per thousand of population.
Probing Correct pronoun usage
whose
further
to the table, it becomes obvious that US health spendings
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
are
nearly twice as much as Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Netherlands
expenses with 6,719$ and 3,481$ respectively. Despite the fact that only 2,581$ are directed into medicine which is the smallest sum of money among the three countries, the life expectancy of the Japanese reaches 83 years which overtakes both the Netherlands
and the US where average
lifespan does not exceed 80 and 78 years.
Correct article usage
the average
Overall
, Japan with the smallest financial resources that are spent on one person provides more hospital beds and shows remarkably better average life expectancy than Netherlands
and Correct article usage
the Netherlands
US
Correct article usage
the US
do
. As opposed to Japan, Unnecessary verb
apply
spendings
in the US is far more, Correct your spelling
spending
however
, it does not positively affect the number of years that people live and the quality of hospital beds positively.Submitted by dostoesckaya.annushka on
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