A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary/unpaid work in your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful Give details of when you would be available for work
Dear sir,
I recently received the news related to the voluntary work in the town museum. Well, I totally understand my responsibilities of being a responsible citizen.
Along with
this
, my university have
given me a project to do part-time society service for 6 months. Change the verb form
has
Therefore
, I really wan
to join the group.
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want
Moreover
, not only I
inherit some good leadership skills but Add a missing verb
do I
also
I am very co-operative
in managing work with all the society members Correct your spelling
cooperative
that
might prove a good help for becoming Correct pronoun usage
which
the
member of Correct article usage
a
this
voulntary
organisation. Correct your spelling
voluntary
However
, I also
worked as an
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a
voluntar
at the time of Correct your spelling
volunteer
opening
of Correct article usage
the opening
town
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the town
liberary
.
I am keenly interested Correct your spelling
library
to start
as soon as possibleChange preposition
in starting
to start
. Verb problem
apply
Hence
, I can come this
following Monday morning to get registered as well as
you can provide me with the details about timming
that I should be providing my service.
I really appreciate you for giving me Correct your spelling
timing
trimming
this
chance and gaining
more experience in life.
Yours Sincerely,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea, improving the logical flow of the letter.
task achievement
Always address the recipient appropriately using 'Dear Director' and sign off with 'Yours sincerely' followed by your full name to maintain formality.
task achievement
Refrain from casual language and maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
To enhance cohesion, use a range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas and make the letter easier to follow.
coherence cohesion
Clearly structure the letter into introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion to meet the expectations of the task.
task achievement
Expand on the details of your availability by specifying days and times when you are free to work.
coherence cohesion
Correct grammatical errors and ensure the correct use of past and present tenses to improve the quality of your writing.
task achievement
Provide specific examples of your skills and experience related to the museum work to strengthen your application.
task achievement
Avoid using contractions such as 'I'm' and instead use the full form 'I am' to keep the writing formal.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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