The bar chart below illustrates the amount of time spent on various leisure activities by men and women in a given town in 2019.
The bar chart depicts the number of leisure
hours
different people of a town spend on their pastimes in the year 2019. They are compared accordingly
based on their gender and employment status.
Overall
, it is evident that males dominated women in regard to spending more time on their extra-curricular activities. While
there were no men, who were working as part-timers and as stay-at-home husbands, women were spread over in all different employment situations.
It is noticeable that the female population, who were full-time and part-time workers spent nearly 40 hours
however
, as housewives, they spent about 50 hours
on their pastimes. In addition
to this
, people who were unemployed and retired spent about 70 to 80 hours
on leisure activities no matter their gender. While
fully-employed men had around 50 hours
of leisure time, females had less than 40 hours
.
Therefore
, it is clear that
people have a lot of free time to spend on their leisurely activities after their retirement.Submitted by tejanavyapc2000 on
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