The graph below shows the percentage of people by age group visiting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the percentages of attending the theatre with a range of age

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in Australia from 1978 to 2008. It is clear from the graph, the

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of 14 – 24

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old visited the cinema more frequently than the rest and reached

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the top 92% in 1978 .

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, the

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trend of the

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was to remain steadily around 90%. Contrastingly, there was an upward movement in the oldest

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from 30% to 50% between 1988 and 1998. In the

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,

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with the younger groups, the over 50

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old

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less movie attendance in the whole period. In 1998, the middle age groups started at the same point

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30% and 50% after that they increased slowly until 2003.

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the 50+

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old kept rising and got a peak at 52 % in 2008. Meanwhile, the 25-34

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old

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and the 35-49

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began decreasing gradually from 2003 and down to 68% in 2008.