The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides data about the
number
of visitors
to three different museums in London between June and September 2013.
Overall
, the highest number
of visitors
went to British
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the British
Museum
and the lowest attendance rate had
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was
Science
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the Science
Museum
.
As can clearly be seen, In June the number
of visitors
who went to British
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the British
Museum
was 600000, In July the number
of visitors
increased reaching its peak(roughly 750000 visitors
). In August the number
of visitors
abruptly decreased, however
, it started to rise and in September the British Museum
had the highest attendance rate compared to others.
In June the figure of visitors
who went to Natural
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the Natural
Museum
was pretty high(approximately 550000 individuals), however
, in July the number
of visitors
abruptly decreased from 550000 to more or less 390000. In July the number
increased gradually, and in August the number
of visitors
abruptly rose by approximately 100000.
The lowest attendance rate had Science
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the Science
Museum
in all months, initially
the number
of visitors
was 400000, however
, it abruptly dropped and in August the number
of visitors
was 300000, even though from August to September the number
of visitors
rose it still had the lowest number
of visitors
compared to other museumsSubmitted by lilit_margaryan2006 on
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