Nowadays, more and more people are moving from the countryside to cities, which are becoming overcrowded. What are the reasons for this movement to cities and what can be done to reduce it? ALWAYS read the topic clearly and work out exactly what you have to write abou

In the beginning ,Whilst some proponents assert that living in the

metropoloses

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metropolises

metropolis

is more convenient for

advanced

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lifestyle,

countryside

residents advocate the other direction.I am of the belief that dwelling in the urban

area

is

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place for workforce chances and educational opportunities. On the one hand, the chief advantage of

countryside

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the countryside

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is related to health,

wherase

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whereas

where

cities

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city

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dwellers suffer from air pollution.

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means that when some people take the decision to reside in

urban

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area

this

lead to

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icrease

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increase

their

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chance

to be

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employed faster, and

well educated

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as well.

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, a recent study conducted by WHO

reveales

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reveals

revealed

that the employment rate in civic

area

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is three times more than

rural

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in rural

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one

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.

Hence

, the financial and educational factors are the main motive for

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internal

immigation

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immigration

process when it comes to

statisic

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statistic

statistical

statistics

analysis.

Nevertheless

, the step that should be taken to lessen moving toward urban areas is a governmental action to

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the multinational

factories

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factories'

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location. To

exaplain

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explain

that , commuting workers are seeking

fulltime

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job, if that

factories

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distribution

have

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changed to a rural

area

, it will

definetily

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definitely

accelerate that objective.

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, the

Egyption

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Egyptian

government has recently legislated that dictates that the second branch of any enterprise should be located in the

countryside

.A second role to decrease that

migation

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migration

mitigation

is building

a

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apply

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new colleges and educational institutions in the outskirts of the capitals.

Therefore

, what can be is that the governmental strategy

play

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a crucial role in developing the

countryside

. In conclusion,

after

this

essay has

manifestes

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manifested

manifests

manifestos

that

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points

mentionted

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mentioned

above, it can be said that the education level and high employment rate are the main reason

of

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that migration.

However

, the

geiographaical

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geographical

reallocation of

that

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those

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resources can redesign the

countryside

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future.