some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness ,in spite of greater responsibilites. discuss both these views and give your openion.

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individuals

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the view that the happiest time of one's life is when they are

teenage

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teenagers

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,

while

others believe that despite

adults

' responsibilities, they are more likely to be more satisfied with their lives. I strongly agree with the latter opinion.

To begin

with, some people argue that

adults

can benefit from a wide range of activities that make them feel happy.

Firstly

, they can pursue careers that match their interests and talents. Following

such

careers gives them a sense of satisfaction, which is vital to be positive and happy.

Secondly

, developing your own family and living with your loved ones are things that can bring a true sense of joy .

Finally

, if

adults

decide to go on a holiday, they are very likely to benefit from the necessary resources.

In contrast

to children, they are independent and are able to afford a vocation without worrying about their financial or educational status, which can improve their moods now and

then

.

On the other hand

, another group claims that

teenagers

are getting support

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parents and do not suffer from having tight schedules, they can be happy. They strictly insist that children not only benefit from

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of mind but

also

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.

Consequently

, having high standards of living provided by parents,

teenagers

should not have any issues that make them sad.

However

, I do not find

this

argument convincing.

Although

financial stability and excellent amenities play a significant role in

ones

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happiness, other factors should be taken into consideration.

For example

, most

teenagers

are deprived of the freedom that they desire.

However

,they may have to participate in various voluntary work as a part of school programs.

In addition

, they are sometimes compelled to go to bed early, leading to several mental problems

such

as depression, which can

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them from being as happy as possible.

To conclude

, in my view, living as an adult provides the opportunity to be satisfied with your life. From my perspective, there are several activities, having a well-paid job and getting married,

for instance

, making

adults

happy,

while

most

teenagers

are not allowed to experience what they enjoy