The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015.
The line graph gives information on how many
Vietnamese
scholars studied in three different countries namely France,Russia and America
over the period of fifteen years.
Overall
, it is clear that
while
there was an increase in the number of Vietnamese
students
studying in America
and France,in Russia it was the opposite.Also
, the trends for the USA saw the highest growth over the given period.
In the initial year, the figure for Vietnamese
recruitment in France dropped sharply from 3.6 to 2.6 million in the become times, and this
figure stagnated unchanged until 2010.However
, this
indicator increased sharply to 4.6. From 2000 to 2010, the total of Vietnamese
students
in Russia decreased significantly and reached 2.8 million people. However
, since this
year, this
number has shown a considerable rise and has the lowest share among others.
The number of Vietnamese
students
in America
had a steep increase till the end of the period .In spite of the share for America
being the lowest 1.6 in the initial year, it became the dominant among 3 countries with 5 million students
in 2000.Submitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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