You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. What the event is. Why the event is being held? What arrangements have already been made? How your friend can help?
Hi David,
I am writing an invitation
of
my sister's wedding in my home town.
When my sister's marriage Change preposition
to
has been
fixed my family and I Wrong verb form
was
are so much
busy. Rephrase
were very
Besides
this
, we have short
time for Correct article usage
a short
preparation
of Correct article usage
the preparation
this
function. However
, to organize
Wrong verb form
organising
this
event is our family tradition and almost every couple before marriage we celebrate bachelor
party. Correct article usage
the bachelor
Although
, you would remember that on
my wedding I organised as well.
The decorations Change preposition
at
of
Change preposition
for
party
Add an article
the party
has
almost done but two things are still pending now. If you remember that you had hired the musical band and photographer on my day Verb problem
are
so
I would request you to please call them again. At that time the string band had performed Correct word choice
apply
fantastic
and everyone enjoyed Change the word
fantastically
much
. Correct pronoun usage
it much
Moreover
, the pictures he captured was
awesome and when I saw my photos it Correct subject-verb agreement
were
goes
nostalgic. If you contact those Verb problem
got
peoples
Fix the agreement mistake
people
so
we will have a chance to enjoy Correct word choice
apply
this
moment again.
I am looking forward to hearing back as soon as possible.
Warm wishesSubmitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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greeting and closing
Begin your letter with a proper greeting and end with an appropriate closing statement to improve clarity.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear idea. Combine the sentences related to past experiences with the band and photographer into a single paragraph for better coherence.
complete response
Clearly state what event you are organizing at the beginning of your letter. Provide explicit details about the nature of the event, why it's being held, and what has been arranged so far.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a tone that is consistent with writing to a friend. Avoid overly formal language or phrases that may not suit the context of a personal correspondence.
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