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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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the given map
depict
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depicts
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 the data of three proposed locations which will be new
supermarket
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supermarkets
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 in
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Arlington
Islington
Lexington
elington
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Elington
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 city after the analysis, it is clearly stated that
the
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zone
 A is the residential
area
 where you find most people. in
this
zone
 traffic and park
area
 are attached
with
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to
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 each making it
hot
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a hot
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 spot for individuals apart from that,
,
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apply
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hampford
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Samford
 city is just 15 km away from site A with
the
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a
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 population close to 30,000
while
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railway
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the railyway
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railyway
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Railyway
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 line
surpassing
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surpasses
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area
 A toward
hampford
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Samford
 city
furthermore
, the remaining areas are
on
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in
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 the countryside.
the
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apply
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zone
 C is the start of
industrial
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the industrial
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 and
railyway
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railway
area
 which move to urban location
additionally
, towards
east
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the east
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 a large airport
area
 has been built for people to travel whilst in location B where considered most villages exist and
long
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a long
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 route of
motorway
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the motorway
a motorway
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 is close to
this
area
overall
, it is vividly manifested that all three zones are located far away from each other
however
,
zone
 A is
hot
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a hot
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area
 where most modern necessities are easily available
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words zone, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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