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The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the given map
depict
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 the data of three proposed locations which will be new
supermarket
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supermarkets
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 in
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Arlington
Islington
Lexington
elington
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Elington
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 city after the analysis, it is clearly stated that
the
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zone
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 A is the residential
area
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 where you find most people. in
this
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zone
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 traffic and park
area
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 are attached
with
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to
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 each making it
hot
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a hot
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 spot for individuals apart from that,
,
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hampford
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Samford
 city is just 15 km away from site A with
the
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a
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 population close to 30,000
while
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railway
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the railyway
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railyway
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Railyway
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 line
surpassing
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surpasses
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area
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 A toward
hampford
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Samford
 city
furthermore
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, the remaining areas are
on
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 the countryside.
the
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apply
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zone
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 C is the start of
industrial
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the industrial
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 and
railyway
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railway
area
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 which move to urban location
additionally
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, towards
east
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the east
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 a large airport
area
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 has been built for people to travel whilst in location B where considered most villages exist and
long
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a long
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 route of
motorway
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the motorway
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 is close to
this
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area
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overall
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, it is vividly manifested that all three zones are located far away from each other
however
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,
zone
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 A is
hot
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a hot
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area
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 where most modern necessities are easily available

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words zone, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population density
  • foot traffic
  • residential area
  • commercial area
  • outskirts
  • industrial zone
  • city center
  • commuting
  • accessible
  • proposed sites
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