You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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the given map
depict
the data of three proposed locations which will be new Change the verb form
depicts
supermarket
in Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
Correct your spelling
Arlington
Islington
Lexington
elington
city
after the analysis, it is clearly stated that Change the capitalization
Elington
the
Remove the article
apply
zone
A is the residential area
where you find most people. in this
zone
traffic and park area
are attached with
each making it Change preposition
to
hot
spot for individuals apart from that,Correct article usage
a hot
,
Change the punctuation
apply
hampford
city is just 15 km away from site A with Correct your spelling
Samford
the
population close to 30,000 Correct article usage
a
while
Correct your spelling
railway
Correct article usage
the railyway
railyway
line Change the capitalization
Railyway
surpassing
Wrong verb form
surpasses
area
A toward hampford
city
Correct your spelling
Samford
furthermore
, the remaining areas are on
the countryside. Change preposition
in
the
Correct article usage
apply
zone
C is the start of industrial
and Correct article usage
the industrial
railyway
Correct your spelling
railway
area
which move to urban location additionally
, towards east
a large airport Correct article usage
the east
area
has been built for people to travel whilst in location B where considered most villages exist and long
route of Correct article usage
a long
motorway
is close to Add an article
the motorway
a motorway
this
area
overall
, it is vividly manifested that all three zones are located far away from each other however
, zone
A is hot
Add an article
a hot
area
where most modern necessities are easily availableSubmitted by abdulahad08600 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words zone, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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