The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how
sugar
is manufactured from Use synonyms
sugarcane
. Use synonyms
Overall
, the process of making Linking Words
sugar
consists of 7 steps with 3 major steps namely farming, separating, and drying.
In the first process of farming, Use synonyms
sugarcane
needs to be planted and it will take between 12 to 18 months until it is ready to be harvested. There are two ways to harvest it, either manually pick it up by hand or using a specially designed tractor to pick up the Use synonyms
sugarcane
. Use synonyms
The following step is
to separate its juice from Linking Words
sugarcane
by crushing it into a machine. Afterwards, a limestone filter is used to purify the juice.
The next step starts with cooking the juice Use synonyms
in
a high heat temperature to turn it into a syrup. Change preposition
at
Subsequently
, a Linking Words
sugar
crystal will be separated from the syrup using a centrifuge. In the end, the Use synonyms
sugar
will need to be dry and cool first before used.Use synonyms
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